Babies

I read Tara's blog on occasion...sometimes she writes Haiku. I always enjoy them and am inspired, so, while I am no English teacher, I decided to try my own. Here are several attempts:

I saw it today.
The movie about babies.
Oliver is one.

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A buttercup had
A bright yellow reflection
He must like butter.

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They fall from the sky
Maple tree helicopters
Swirling all around.

Now it is time for bed. Will I sleep or lay awake counting syllables or trying to understand what exactly a mora is????